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Just a bunch of random shit that I wanna put up. :P Such as sprite-sheets, W.I.P.s, drawings and more! :D BTW, if you have a problem with that, just click the BACK button and leave. I do NOT tolerate trolls/assholes. Thank you! <33 Also, you're welcome to join in on the fun if you so choose! Just PM me!


Rika's new look.

July 13th, 2014, 11:15 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply Draven22, July 13th, 2014, 11:15 pm

ok umm...so...let the criticsm and hate begin! *has riot shield*

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User's Comments:

Reply Zocky, July 13th, 2014, 11:19 pm

No shield can protect you from text on a computer screen!

Reply Draven22, July 13th, 2014, 11:28 pm

@Zocky: i know but it helps...sop umm..yea feel free to judge and critique it anyway you see fit.

Reply Zocky, July 13th, 2014, 11:32 pm

Well the hair shading is by far the worst part. It obviously has a different light source to the rest of the sprite. Looks really ugly and out of place. Plus it looks flat and wooden.

I'd say focus on fixing that. Maybe try re-shading the whole sprite, and make sure the light source is consistent.

Reply Draven22, July 13th, 2014, 11:36 pm

@Zocky: ooh umm ok i expected worse...and the haair is worse? *goes to double check the lighitng* i could've sworn i had the lighting correct..

Reply Zocky, July 14th, 2014, 1:33 am

@Draven22: Well, from my perspective, it doesn't really look like hair. It looks like someone stapled a piece of wood onto this sprite's head. That's what I meant when I said it looks ugly and out of place. You should really re-edit the hair and try to make it look more natural. Better shading could help.

Reply Draven22, July 14th, 2014, 2:44 am

@Zocky: oh ok..to be honest still getting used to hair.

Reply Spar Elric, July 15th, 2014, 2:59 am

@Draven22: Hair can be a pain. XP

It helps to think of it as clumps of strands, instead of as one big clump though.

Reply Moon light madness, July 15th, 2014, 9:57 am

@Spar Elric: Perms...

Reply Moon light madness, July 15th, 2014, 10:13 am

@Draven22: Criticism time!!!



One word:Doesn't match

Reply Draven22, July 15th, 2014, 10:15 am

@Moon light madness: what doesn't match o.o

Reply Moon light madness, July 15th, 2014, 10:17 am

@Draven22: The hair and the green fur.
Maybe green and hello would work.


Just saying.


Also anyone can I get perms plz!!!!!!

Reply Spar Elric, July 18th, 2014, 6:33 pm

@Moon light madness: Sorry. I was gone camping!

I'm the only admin of this place and the permissions are STILL messing up for me!

I tried to grant you perms 3 times in a row! It hates me. ;-;

EDIT: Got it! :D

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