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New Tail for Velocity ~Kyraii

October 15th, 2013, 1:46 am

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Reply Kyraii, October 15th, 2013, 1:50 am

Aside from changing her top a little and the gloves (I feel this works better for her than the long sleeved top she had before), I also made a new tail that I haven't added to the other sprites since I want critique on it. I don't want to use the normal fox tail since it's a bit awkward looking, but I clearly have no idea how to sprite a tail of my own. Also changed her board a little.
Constructive critique is welcome.

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Reply Zocky, October 15th, 2013, 3:09 am

What is that surf board looking thing? One of those Extreme Gears from Sonic Riders? Whatever it is, I think you should work on the shading on that, to give it a more three dimensional look. It looks too flat and bland. I can tell you used pillow shading, and that's bad. Try shading from a light source, that should spruce it up. In fact, always shade from a light source. Pillow shading almost never looks good.

The custom tail looks better then the stock tail everyone uses. But you might want to reshape it a little. It looks bent at an unnatural angle, like she slammed it in a door and it broke.

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