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Velocity ~Kyraii

July 24th, 2013, 6:40 am

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Reply Kyraii, July 24th, 2013, 6:43 am

This is Velocity, she's a character I'm making for a comic that will focus on her.
I gave her two outfits, one for racing extreme gear and the other for just casual.
I'm still coming up with ideas for the character itself, and I'm not too sure about the outfits either. Feedback is welcome, on both the sprite and the concept of the outfits :3

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Reply Kurona, July 24th, 2013, 7:57 am

... well, simply put, I think you've done an amazing job here. The only real thing I can offer are some finishing touches.

Those being that the black outline should be replaced by a fourth, darker shade of whatever colour it's surrounding. The other concerns the second shade of white on the tail and muzzle. It sort of looks blue, and is inconsistent with the other shades. Thus, I recommend you use the shades of white here: (The second one from the left is the one to replace the blueish shade I talked about)

Though do remember that these are problems with the original sonic advance sprites, not yours, and you've done an amazing job regardless.

Reply Kyraii, July 24th, 2013, 8:26 am

I actually hadn't realized that the white shade was a problem, nor the outline.
Thanks for the critique, and now I know that about the advance sprites.

Reply Spar Elric, July 24th, 2013, 7:29 pm

Very nicely done. :)

Reply Kurona, July 30th, 2013, 6:06 am

It's not a problem per se, it's just a little more professional and better-looking. But welcome anyhow.

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