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a cat i suppose?-draven

June 15th, 2013, 3:15 am

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Reply Draven22, June 15th, 2013, 3:20 am

hi there just joined...i made this two days ago after not spriting for months...its supposed to be a girl cat but i messed up the tail i think.....and i pulled the legs and feet from a character revamp a friend did for me so i'm gonna have problems recreating it but meh

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Reply Kurona, June 15th, 2013, 3:32 am

Nice... what sort of cat?

Reply Spar Elric, June 15th, 2013, 3:28 pm

A cat with a fluffy tail. XD

Reply Syogren, June 15th, 2013, 3:42 pm

It looks nice, but I have a few suggestions.

First, the tail. Basically, it's shaded that--oh wait, the whole thing is basically shaded so that the light source is facing down. Never-mind.

Second, the gray/grey. The darkest two shades don't have enough contrast, and the brightest two have too much.

Third, the head. It doesn't seem to have any shading. I think you're trying to make the muzzle a lighter gray and the rest a darker gray. In this case, I'd recommend having a different set of shades entirely for the second grey.

The hair is a little pillow shaded in the back, but it's not much of a problem.

The tail, feet, and hands can't seem to decide what their darkest shade is. I'd reccomend replacing the black with the darkest gray. Other than that, it doesn't seem to be much of a problem.

The cyan shirt has four shades, but they aren't distributed all that well. I guess what I'm trying to say is that you should use a bit more of the second to last shade on the left, which doesn't have it. The pants look odd at best.

Overall, though, it does look good. I hope you consider this advice, and keep up the good work!

Reply Draven22, June 16th, 2013, 1:04 am

@Syogren: ok thanks, and i'll work on i but umm...shes wearing a skirt

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